This question is based on General Literature Principles and Literary Appreciation.
'A slight breeze murmured in the air. Grasses swayed as if in resentment. Over in the horizon, just beneath the spectrum of the ascending sun, horizontal brands of red cloud hung menacingly above the tips of the trees and morning air smelled of burnt clay.'
The Victims by Isidore Okpewho
Effect in the above passage is achieved through the use of
The passage from Isidore Okpewho's The Victims is rich with sensory detail that appeals primarily to the sense of sight. Consider the specific images: a "slight breeze" that makes grasses sway, "the spectrum of the ascending sun," "horizontal brands of red cloud" hanging "menacingly above the tips of the trees," and morning air that "smelled of burnt clay." Nearly every phrase paints a picture - colours (red cloud, the spectrum of sunlight), shapes (horizontal brands above treetops), and visual movement (grasses swaying, the sun ascending).
The effect in this passage is achieved through the use of visual images. The writer constructs the scene by layering one vivid, concrete picture upon another, allowing the reader to see the landscape as if standing within it. The red clouds, the ascending sun, the swaying grasses, and the burnt-clay tones all work together to create an atmosphere of foreboding beauty through visual means.
While the passage does contain description, the specific technique that produces its effect is visual imagery rather than mere "detailed description" (which could include non-visual details). The effect is not achieved through punctuation (which is functional, not artistic, here) or a subdued tone (the imagery is vivid and assertive, with clouds hanging "menacingly"). Visual images are the primary tool through which Okpewho creates the passage's striking atmospheric effect.