Descriptive Writing
Overzicht
Descriptive writing is one of the two composition choices on Paper 2 Section B, and it is worth a full 40 marks. Its job is not to tell a story but to paint a place, a moment or a person so vividly that the reader can see, hear and feel it. The best descriptions are made of precise, closely observed detail and a controlling atmosphere, not general scenery and not a chain of events. The single most common way candidates lose marks here is to drift into narrative; this lesson shows you how to stay in description and make it sing.
You will learn how the 40 marks split (16 for content and structure, 24 for style and accuracy), how to choose specific over stereotyped detail, how to build atmosphere through the senses, and how to give a description shape instead of a list. You will see flat sentences rewritten into vivid ones, a fully annotated model paragraph, and a complete worked task with a model response.
Doelstellingen
- Express what is observed, thought, felt and imagined in vivid description.
- Create atmosphere and a clear sense of place through precise detail and imagery.
- Structure a description so it has shape and direction rather than a list of details.
Lesnotitie
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- On Paper 2 Section B, how are the 40 marks for a composition divided? A. 20 for content, 20 for accuracy B. Up to 16 for content and structure, up to 24 for style and accuracy C. Up to 24 for content, up to 16 for style D. 40 for accuracy alone Answer: B
- Which sentence is descriptive rather than narrative? A. I got up, ate breakfast and walked to the beach. B. The beach at dawn lay silver and still, the sand cool and untouched, the only sound the slow drag of the tide. C. First we set up the umbrella, then we went swimming, then we ate. D. After an hour, we packed up and drove home. Answer: B
- Which detail is most likely to reach the top descriptive bands? A. The shop was very nice and old. B. The animal was big and a bit scary. C. Behind the counter rose a wall of glass jars, each crammed with lemon drops and liquorice coils. D. It was a beautiful day with lovely weather. Answer: C
- What is the single most common error penalised in descriptive answers? A. Using too many adjectives B. Slipping into narrative (telling a story) instead of describing C. Writing in the first person D. Describing more than one sense Answer: B
- What is atmosphere in descriptive writing? A. The number of characters in the scene B. The sequence of events that takes place C. The dominant mood the description creates, built through detail and word choice D. The correct use of paragraphs Answer: C
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